Wednesday, February 28, 2018

A Better Way Comments

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A better way,
A peaceful road;
A righteous path!
To come along with your mind,
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Edward Kofi Louis
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Edward Kofi Louis 15 June 2018

Tree of life. Thanks for your comment on my poem. Stay blessed always.

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Akhtar Jawad 15 June 2018

Obeying the laws, And to eat of the tree of life. But the laws should be modified with the changing time.

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Edward Kofi Louis 01 March 2018

Muse! ! A righteous path! Thanks for your comment on my poem. Stay blessed always.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 01 March 2018

A peaceful road and a righteous path will bring you safe towards your destination in life.Great piece.

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Go a better way obeying the laws.Thanks for sharing.

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Edward Kofi Louis

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