A Better Tomorrow Comments

With silken smiles of happiness we are swinging now because rain has washed faces. Smile is evergreen and very beautiful. This poem is very beautifully and excellently penned...10

Soothing words Heather, something to brighten ones day. Wrinkles or no wrinkles.

Full of hope and optimism. Well written my friend!

Sweet the natural process of age and healing well put.

Lovely way to say a better tomorrow with Gods's cleansing rain and your calming words...regards

Better tomorrow......10 I am sure Sun will secure Bright future For us to endure

Love the way you have described changing of mindset for better future. :)

Wonderful, amazing....true hope Glory to be Lord Love your art

thanks Stephen for selecting my poem I appreciate it. heather

I've shared it on Be Happy Cartoons on facebook so more people can benefit from your poem.

I've made this poem one of my favourites. I love the way you describe raindrops washing cares away. It's brevity makes it all the more powerful. It's the kind of poem that can enter one's subconscious, you just need to imagine those raindrops. I will recommend reading this poem to any of my patients with lots of worries. I've just written a book on happiness, read thousands of poems in search of poems to help people, and found few as good as this. It's a shame my book has gone to print, I would have loved to include it (with your permission of course) .

Beautiful poem Heather. Loved the refreshing smiles that brought happiness. cool and pleasant to read. Loved it. Thank a lot Heather for the inspiring comments for my poems.

what and where we made it wrong the best cure in hand of nature cute your splash of nature

Overflowing with optimism my friend

Always hope wins. It's a pretty poem. Thanks.

rain drops reviving a zeal to live on......the poem itself brings silken smiles indeed...thanks for ur comments.....

Great write! The worn out yesterday's gone. Tomorrow is a new birth! There's hope of renewal.

A better tomorrow is waiting for all. Thai is the nice thing cited in whole. Expressed poem on the desk so far. This poem shines like a tiny star.

Very inspiring and composed beautifully..........I liked it

Let a splash cleanse all the cob webs of life Let the life smiles with all beauty and shine Let that tomorrow come and be with everyone . ..... very nice