A garden of thorns and thistles,
Someone had ceceicved you my love;
And flying up high like an eagle to view the world,
But someone had stolen your love away from me.
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Peace and love to all mankind without racism! ! For a better tomorrow. Thanks for your comment on my poem. Stay blessed always.
A poignant write yet it ended with a positive thought. Yes, there is always light at the end of the tunnel and there will always be a better tomorrow if we keep on spreading love and peace to all.
...there will be a better tomorrow for me. A wonderful write, especially how it ended on a optimistic note. Thanks for sharing.
You know Edward its strange how people don't really understand the hurt that you go through When loving someone you can't love you back no matter what you try to do I might have this poem Miss read but its nicely said if only you know if only
coexisting is good, makes the world a better place. Thanks for the highlight of both sides of the coin
So very, very true. If only we could learn to live with each other, and accept each other for what we are. The world would be a wonderful place. Tango.
Wow! If everyone had this mindset, the entire world would be a better place to live. Wonderful piece of writing.
simple but i wish it had more lines but was short and to the point.
Every betrayal has repentance. Tomorrow always comes with brightest future and positivity. Poignant write.
Praise God we can move forward with God's strength and love. Many can relate from these words Edward...Excellent poem.....
Hope and Dreams! ! ! For a better tomorrow! Going through the odds of life. Thanks for your comment on my poem. Stay blessed always.