Friday, August 17, 2018

A Better Place Comments

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A Better Place

The atmosphere disintegrates
right before me
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Kimber Lee Iacona
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Louie Aries 17 August 2018

Sad, emotional..and very well written..

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Captain Cur 17 August 2018

Hopefully in that wind this poem has taken wing to far greater horizons. Emotional, sad and very well written at that age. If only we could ride that wind back to youth.

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