Friday, March 8, 2013

A Better Place Comments

Rating: 4.8

I cant Fight No longer
gravity is pulling me down
i have no reason to be stronger
cause it tares me apart every time i start
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Vineet Chhikara 28 May 2013

in the 4th line it should be it tears me apart... tares is a wrong word i guess... and ur poem iss good... i suggest u read my poem called faith... it is kind of opposite to it...

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