Friday, October 4, 2019

A Better Person Comments

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I've tried being nice,
I've strived to be kind.
Now mixed moral thoughts,
Begin to fill my mind.
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Shaun Cronick
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Shaun Cronick 25 October 2020

Thanks again Rose Marie and just to say I might write an even longer version one day. Take care and I wish you well.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 October 2019

A wonderful poem with a great message. There are people who are geared to make their fellow men miserable in life. Some want to claim success at the expense of others. We must show them that what they are doing are bad by teaching them a lesson in life. Excellent write with great rhyme. Onto my Poem List.

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Shaun Cronick 11 October 2019

Thank you Rose Marie for another kind comment.

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