A Better Lover Comments

Better is really better therefore be good and ever positive.

simple straight forward but hits the nail right on the head. Good poem, strong message

Nice poem with an honesty and simplicity reflected through each line. Keep writing

O! realy? Dats jst some wonderful stuff truely written with much honesty. You just do not disappoint Anele. Do u? You one of the most active young lad I've came across

VERY GOOD! I loved this one!

Its indeed good fdull of UN-expectations...and you've carried me thro' Specially 'But Still Want To Be A Better Loser, ' thats the spirit if we get everything best life becomes stale insipid I thank you for a poem with fodder for thought...tenner ~ Regards ~ niv Thanks for comment on my poem I Want To Be Raped Invite to read and comment on my sequel poem [read as a protest] ‘Ogling Orgy’ or any … Thanks …..Sorry for belated comment

Indeed, I also wana be a better father to my kids and a better lover to my sweetheart! ! awesome my friend... Siya_! !