A Better Life Comments
The more you think about it
life gets harder everyday. You
strive to do the right thing, but
at times, it can go astray. It's
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In this poem you have expressed your dissatisfaction with those events in life that we all dislike. Your words are simple yet full of description. A very good job. Read mine – Cicatrix - Adeline
Very good poem. It tells about the reality of modern life in which we have forgotten main objective to serve humanity and serve God. You are extremely truthful in your poem. I liked it.
i completely agree with you.life does get hard all of the time.everyone trys to do the right thing.sometimes people fall but in the end everything falls right back into place
Such wise and true words in this lovely poem..things get more expensive each day but sunshine and fresh air is free and its all for me and thee...nice write...regards ++++10
Materialism is fatalism. Nice poem. Ms. Nivedita Ten++ UK Thanks for comments Cordially invite to read and comment on Enigmatic Navel Lie Sly or other poems. niv
It is an abstract poem that has a very strong message. I think that the poetess wants to send us the idea that the acceptingness of the reality can save us, the illusion can only turn us onto a wrong way, apparently right.Excellent poem...........10+++++++
In our quest to achieve more, for us and for our family, we focus only on our materialistic needs turning into a machine. It's time we take a moment to see ourselves. Is this what we really are? Nice write...........
fantastic.such a kind persona. i belive you can make a lot of difference to the rest of us. posted10 love surys
deep thinking there. materialism is something that we need to come out to reclaim the essence of life and its joys 10+
dammnn thats really good. Sounds perfessional haha Keep writing, its good you write alot
Jeez! 838 poems? You're on a roll! Keep it up! You are so right about us forgetting... with all of the new innovations in technology we miss out on things without even realizing it.We are the ones who make our life complicated, which makes it harder to keep up with the younger crowd once we are too old to sit at the computer or text our B.F.F.S.Your poem makes sense.
What sense and wisdom you have written here Audrey. Life is too short not to get it right. Fond wishes from Fay. in Cornwall U.K.
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7/21/2025 4:10:59 AM # 1.0.0
I have read several of your poems I concur with your expressions in the poems I have read. I have copied several of them to pass them on to acquaintances so they could find comfort in their infirmities Terrance Tracy.