Wednesday, December 3, 2008

A Better Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

Theres this girl at our school.
Who is always alone.
She doesnt have money.
Or even a home.
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Silence Dogood
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Dr Pintu Mahakul 31 March 2019

Sometimes we wonder about life and we try to feel this life with great joy. Living in poverty is so sad and none like this. We need peaceful life and a better life. Your idea is nice.10

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Very captivating. Keep writing.

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Paul Prescott 15 December 2008

this is really fantastic :) well done to i just feel sorry an really bad for the girl

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Stephanie Fiddy 03 December 2008

Very nice. I give it a 10 :)

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Gutter Box 03 December 2008

i love this poem...this is going in my favs. Good job 10/10 for me.

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