Sunday, April 10, 2022

A Better Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

on the other shore
the waters are crystal green
unlike these so blue
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
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LeeAnn Azzopardi 10 April 2022

This is in the top five Bravo!

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 10 April 2022

I appreciate your warm remarks so much.

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Good poem.5 *s. Do keep writing and sharing. Thank you.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 10 April 2022

I will keep writing. Thank you very much.

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The allure of "the other shore" is surely, a mirage. We need to learn to live our life. On the other hand we need to live our life fully. Acquire new knowledge, fresh skills so that we can live a "better " life, wherever we are.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 10 April 2022

Thank you very much for your thoughts. However, I do feel that people should follow their dreams. But, if your dream is to stay put, that's okay too. Sometimes what you're looking for is on the other shore.

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