A Better Life Poem by Evelyn Judy Buehler

A Better Life

Rating: 5.0

on the other shore
the waters are crystal green
unlike these so blue

sun sparkles rubies
and mauve birds sing on the wing
into plum tinged nights

on the other side
dark shadows dance in sunshine
through the blue green days

rainbows touch the ground
and butterflies trail fragrance
in the land of dreams

A Better Life
Sunday, April 10, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: haiku,life,adventure,dreams,nature,beauty,sea
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
LeeAnn Azzopardi 10 April 2022

This is in the top five Bravo!

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 10 April 2022

I appreciate your warm remarks so much.

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Good poem.5 *s. Do keep writing and sharing. Thank you.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 10 April 2022

I will keep writing. Thank you very much.

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The allure of "the other shore" is surely, a mirage. We need to learn to live our life. On the other hand we need to live our life fully. Acquire new knowledge, fresh skills so that we can live a "better " life, wherever we are.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 10 April 2022

Thank you very much for your thoughts. However, I do feel that people should follow their dreams. But, if your dream is to stay put, that's okay too. Sometimes what you're looking for is on the other shore.

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