A Better Day Comments

By writing this poem I am sure your 'better day' has become a little closer to you. The power of poetry. You seem to have direction and a vision of where you want to go with your creative writing.

great poem touching a wonderful dream we all have

this is good. why? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? unlike most who settle in the darkness you seem to realise that there is light. search for it. i believe you would find it.

Of course it will happen, it is tomorrow no longer than the day after..could be latter today..iip