Monday, May 18, 2009
A Better Day Comments
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The fire in the sky is burning
The child in my heart is yearning
As I learn the truth about you
The wind is blowing through my soul
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Twilight Whispers
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Rachel Ellard
03 November 2009
I can really relate to the feelings you have expressed here. This is very good.
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Saadat Tahir
24 May 2009
very nice lines so tender an touchy its a tenner i did a similar poem...why dont you then heed? do it when time permits cheers
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7/19/2025 9:44:15 PM # 1.0.0
very impressive i really like your poem ^.^