Friday, October 9, 2015

A Better Day. Comments

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The day was uneventful asever
no deaths, is it a matter of time
an equipoise?
Some people are clamouring outside
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Ananya Guha
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Roseann Shawiak 18 October 2015

Fantastic poem, so aptly describing the ways of the people in this world, doing all kinds of heinous crimes, wanting attention on the news and in headlines. Clamoring for raises by government employees, yet never doing anything to earn the money, people still suffering outside the government offices. Great portrayal of life in our world. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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