A Betrayed Tree Comments
Dance,
these boughs and branches
sway,
revelry at the midday,
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simple and nice...read my poem 'a never ending story- exploitation'
The poem breathes positive feelings and emotions! This is an important aspect of life! Never to feel lost in this arena of life! Your poem does convey a good message! 10! -Raj Nandy
heartbreak and the pain...poor tree thats when it couldn't stand up on its own roots... loved the comparison u made... : D
I love the ending.. Great write...
this was short but potrayed a lot of thought and effort- nice work, i liked it
A tree of betrayal dying of its own act.Good job Kite.
yeah be like tree strong and free.......... Good write......
a strong tree u are, indeed we are all scorched by the trials that are set before us, and are betrayed often by those we hold dear, well illustrated, nice piece
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7/18/2025 7:47:14 PM # 1.0.0
Absolutely beautiful 10