Sandhya S.N

Sandhya S.N

Thiruvananthapuram, Kerala, India
Monday, June 8, 2009

A Betrayed Heart! ! ! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Heart! Heart! Lovely heart
The call of a mercantile
Vicious and wittiest
To sell his golden dazzling hearts
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Sandhya S.N
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Marieta Maglas 21 August 2009

nice conceptual metaphor: ''“There is always a weeping heart Behind every poignant smile” wonderful poem...........10

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Jt Jayasingh 30 July 2009

True, a poets heart longs for love. Sometimes it gets but always to fail again. It is an eternal struggle. But on maturity the heart may start seeking something permenant.Confessional, but you are a born poet. write...

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Catrina Heart 04 July 2009

Smile remind her the comment The comment of a Philippine poet “There is always a weeping heart Behind every poignant smile” wow another meticulous crafted poem.......10+++

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Smile remind her the comment The comment of a Philippine poet “There is always a weeping heart Behind every poignant smile”......yes very true but cry not for it... it willeaaaarnyou shame... i lked the poem read mine ' cry not' and anywhere & butterflies around

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Indira Babbellapati 11 June 2009

the last two lines, the crux of the poem...

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 10 June 2009

The weeping heart that cries for sweet love.Good writes!

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premji premji 09 June 2009

a jilted heart is like a plastic cup once crumbled thrown away... it won't decay and never be a part of earth..........................

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Vinod Ak 09 June 2009

Highly intriguing and poignant expression!

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Surya . 08 June 2009

vow! what a beautifull story on love and betrayal. heart touching. the words are poigant and flow superub. it reminds of seasoned poet behind this. love this poem. voted 10 surya

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Ershad Mazumder 08 June 2009

Do not ask me to comment on earthly love. I do not believe in it. What is the love of Radha-Krishn, Shiri- Farhad, Laily-Majnun and Rojokini -Chandidas. I am in love with my fiance for many decades. But I yet to see her. One day I shall meet her. Here or there. Thanks for very emotional expression.

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Ency Bearis 08 June 2009

a deep emotion well expressed... a heart that feels betrayed...nice write...

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Sandhya S.N

Sandhya S.N

Thiruvananthapuram, Kerala, India
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