A Best Way To Liberation! (1) Comments

a profound and wise thoughts beautifully penned..10++++ Life is conscious existence enjoying bliss in the world; Divine life is eternal conscious existence in bliss absolute! Physical life is consciousness of soul powered by energy; Divine life is consciousness of Universal Spirit everywhere! Matter has evolved from energy powered by Universal Spirit; Human body has time limit as all perishable commodities; The soul within is the dropp of the Universal Soul everywhere, That is the saturation or end point of all living souls here!

Excellent work Ramesh, we all ought to spread our wings and fly. Best wishes, Andrew

Yeah life divine is true life.............other things is waste simply a waste.............

It is a good composition.

Ramesh.I get the message but perhaps you could have planned that message better in fewer lines.In poetry I do not wish to look through an epic of flowery language or repeated themes.Thids is not a criticism in a negative way just trying to be helpful.In the fifth stanza you repeated the word conscious or consciousness on all the lines.Sometimes better to fnd another word with the same meaning.In that way the reader finds the writing more interesting and less laborious. Best of luck with your writing Ramesh, Sid.