A Bend On The Road Comments

Glad I returned to read this poem again!

…mesh with your own experience takes the edge off the thorns and a focus towards the promise! 5*****

Finding a poem at the bend that

I put spotlight on your last stanza

A precious poem. Your stanza is much appreciated.

Very wonderful description about road of lives.

The entire poem is magnificently written.

To use 'lurks' sometimes implies that what lurks could be hazardous/unfortunate. Opportunities, like a marriage or job promotion may sour eventually! ! ! : ( bri

LIne 1: I'd suggest a slight change: 'LIfe's paths are often calm..' [ and often they're not : ( ] ]

R M, yesterday i left comments, neglecting to mention this also: I like the poem. : ) bri

Most beautifully said, well captured and sublimest, So very pleasant to read this morn.Thank you so much for sharing, dearest friend Mrs. Juan Austin

Most beautifyully said, well captured and sublimest, we meet all these plusses and minuses on our life's road, so be it.5 Full Stars on top, to my Favourites. So very pleasant to read this fervent poem again.

PH is goofing up my commenting. I'd use 'a new lease ON life'. bri ;)

a 2: It appears someone threw in an extra space between lines #2 & #3. : ( bri

AND.. I'd use 'a new lease ON life'. Googled: 'Stanza 2: It appears someone threw in an extra space between lines #2 & #3. : ( bri

Stanza 2: It appears someone threw in an extra space between lines #2 & #3. : ( bri

Rose Marie, I'd use 'bend in the road' to mean a difficulty? , or change in course, or a challenge to advancement. My Googling didn't help me. bri ;) .

Superb write......thank u.

When we walk through a straight road, we know what lies ahead! But when we reach a bend, we cannot see what is there before us. It can be a rugged path unlike the one we have so far travelled, strewn with hard rocks and thorns or it could be a door opening to new vistas of opportunity and chance. All depends on our luck! A lovely poem, deep and profound!

Life's path, keenly observed and trutfully told. Life path is constantly like these realities as described in this excellent poem poetically rendered. Thank you so much for sharing, a 10 Full Score for this impressing poem.