A Belief Not Common Comments

How was I going to settle it to lead simple and straight life? ... v. nicely expressed in poem...10

nice piece.... the words of a poet lies within here... well written and expressed

How was I going to settle it to lead simple and straight life? It had sharp edge and was tearing me apart as if operated by knife.....ye nslife is very diificult to, lead....10

anotherwell written and totful poem..i vote t ten also

Another great write with full of wisdom. Well narrated in poetic diction.

‘Let us ignite the passion for humanity…Race, color, skin may differ but there ma y remain pure soul’… Sir I’ve changed the order of sentence sequence as in poetry…[excuse me] the first is ritual and second is the result…marvelous poetry true reflection of Indian Vedic Wisdom…what the turbulent present day world needs now most …thanks sharing… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10