A Beggar's Bowl Comments

A powerful write. There are many thoughts provoking inside the beggar ' s bowl. Brilliantly crafted piece of work.10

Coins will be once again prepared, your bowl cannot remain empty, but, meanwhile, for some time, if a vacuum is created in your bowl, you will vanish in it, you will not get shelter even in The House of Allah! .........Nice philosophical depiction. A great poem I like most. Thanks for sharing......10

Was the beggar a numismatist.....? (just joking!) You have ingeniously made the beggar's bowl to pour all your philosophic thoughts! Enjoyed the poem with lofty thoughts! Id Mubarak, Akhtarji! !

It's a translation of my Urdu poem Kashkol