Tuesday, September 16, 2008

A Beggar Of Mercy Comments

Rating: 4.7

whose is my brother? many times in our lives ask,
the lucid meaning of brotherhood, though in our
hearts, the creator had already implanted us, the
truth of what it mean to be in one race
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Za Thinley Gytso 13 July 2011

It is a marvelous poem written with great skill. Highly rich in imagery and style. I liked it very much. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'Horizon Lost' please type the name of the poem in the search box and search the poem. Warmest regards Za Thinley Gytso

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 04 August 2010

or in every life that is lost, we loss, a sign that our belongingness is loose to know more of ourselves, we.... it is to be lvied full length as it stand so precious to us and get some knowledge out of it.. nice writing sir, , , ,10

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'life we live is an episode to share our soul, a trust we build, ' these are truly beautiful sentiments, a wonderful philosophy of life

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 18 February 2010

i rated this one ten because, yes, this is a powerful piece.

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 18 February 2010

i rated this one 10. The last verse i think is the best!

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Eyan Desir 30 June 2009

Indeed you are right good write

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 15 June 2009

vivaceous. eloberate. skillful. appreciated. shan 10

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Miriam Maia Padua 08 June 2009

expressed from your deepest feelings... a great share for us to ponder...on life... on who we are...how we should live.... we are all brothers... great thoughts... 10+++ l♥ vel♥ ts, maia

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This poem promises an incentive for attentive, trustful and participatory reading; contains brilliant - eternal insights, striking formulations of complex ideas, and passages of great poetic beauty, as well as a profoundly original sensibility. God bless you...10!

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C T Heart 24 September 2008

A powerful piece of prayer, reflecting and remindful...written with zeal.10.

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Tsira Goge 23 September 2008

offered by the giver of life..... be a beggar of mercy.... pray ....................................................................... Remarkably write... The god with you. ...10... tsira

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