Thursday, May 13, 2010

A Beggar Maid Comments

Rating: 4.9

beg me for life
to the unseen one
beg me for living spirit
to the invisible sight
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James Mclain 01 November 2016

And the wind will blow through our bones touch the sky and move the sand to cover what once were our eye's.. and still we rise.. iip

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Uma Ram 11 May 2015

Poem with insighful thoughts...thanks for sharing

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Very insightful and thanksgiving poem and sad expressions.

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Yash Shinde 26 October 2012

very insightful poem lovely liked :)

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Anil Kumar Panda 03 May 2012

very nice.feel the pinch in the lines.liked it.

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Aranthabailu Ummar 23 September 2011

All he gave, and then again he will take it back no cheers no sad this is meant the life nice words it carry me a quite emotinal

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warner treuter 23 August 2010

Lots of gifts. Wonderful. I think care is the most wonderful of gifts. Like knowing the other side of love.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 18 July 2010

‘beg me for life to the unseen one beg me for living spirit to the invisible sight’ ~ The Great Indian Poet R.N.Tagore [Noble Laureate] wrote, ‘Give light to blind/ Give life to dead’ …excellent diction…. congrats for sharing Sir Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Pradyumna Jyotir 27 May 2010

This is so beautiful....and the philosophy is amazing! ! ! !

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Eyan Desir 17 May 2010

Poetic and well express my friend

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Preetam Shetty 13 May 2010

This is beautiful........Hard reality of life....every thing that is given shall be taken back one day

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