Saturday, January 28, 2017

A Beggar Comments

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A beggar on the corner of the street;
I turn away from him; I don't look.
Is he really a poor one in need?
I'm afraid that he may be a crook.
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Aufie Zophy
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Muhammad Ali 15 February 2017

a great problem, beggers who cheat, they are very professional, punctual and hard worker as a businessman. nice poem friend

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Valsa George 12 February 2017

Unfortunately it is difficult to distinguish between the genuine and the fake! But it is unfortunate if a truly deserving person is denied our compassion and generosity! A very thoughtful write!

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Akhtar Jawad 11 February 2017

The beauty of this great poem completely enchanted me, It's thoughtful and it's touching.

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Sister Frances 07 February 2017

Great thought provoking poem :)

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Annette Aitken 01 February 2017

If I see a begger in the street instead of giving them money, I buy food for them instead. ;) Annette

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Hans Vr 04 February 2017

Wonderful idea, Anette. May do something like this in the future too. Thanks.

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Bipasha D 06 December 2017

In fact, I do the same. I always give them some dry food like bread etc

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 28 January 2017

I like the storyline, but too many typo's and grammatical faux-pas...Slow down, and always proof read before you post out. Your reputation as a writer is measured by grammatical command as much as it is creativity and theme. Good Luck- ~FjR~

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