Tuesday, August 19, 2014

A Beggar Comments

Rating: 5.0

Strolling down a dusty
road
at the end of day
coming across a beggar
...
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Heather Burns
COMMENTS
Saint Cynosure 26 October 2014

very, very good, I like it lot.

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Bursting with a beauty that is refreshing!

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Geetha Jayakumar 20 August 2014

Beautiful poem Heather. Very true said in these beautiful lines..... As you travel through this life if you should ever fall I'll hear your voice and answer when you call. Love given will be returned, may be not by the same person, it can be even by some other person too. I loved reading each lines. Thank you Heather, for inspiring comment for my poems, really I am obliged to hear them. Thanks a lot.

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Valsa George 20 August 2014

Love given will be returned, especially to a love starved soul! A beautiful gesture of compassion and gratitude! Enjoyed!

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Ramesh Rai 19 August 2014

Heartfelt write. Loved it much. I too have a beggar. Thanks for sharing. Regards.

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