Saturday, January 17, 2009

A Bee's Life Journey Comments

Rating: 4.6

With the freedom of an outlaw,
bees to whom earth
is but a benevolent garden
and what matters
...
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Milos Jovanka 25 March 2020

A bee is a Gardner of mother earth, this poem is a beautiful ode to one of natures most coveted children. Bless you for this wonderful poem

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Ms Doubtfire 29 December 2019

Mr. BOGUS, how come you always get it right every single time!

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Akhtar Jawad 01 August 2019

A great poem, A master piece by my friend Peer Peerbocus.

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M Schiotis 18 June 2019

Such sweet little creatures, I like the experience your poem gives of being a bee.

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Anjandev Roy 30 March 2019

Purely honey furnished interior. Wonderful poem. anjandev roy.

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Jagdish Singh Ramána 20 January 2019

A beautiful poem! A bee's life journey is full of melodies and work of wandering day and night.- wonderful character. 10*10*10*10

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Indira Renganathan 25 July 2018

Every line is out standing with beauty and richness of an intelligent write....very inspiring poem...thank you for sharing this wonderful work here sir

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Akhtar Jawad 08 July 2018

bees make no distinction and brew for anyone.seeing darts as opportunity of silent service Service brings honey for the bitter life.

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Ruta Mohapatra 06 April 2018

Liked the poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Mohit Katyal 15 July 2017

its pretty good.. keep it up

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Brian Johnston 07 June 2017

A recent book (Botany of Desire) on plants suggests that by making themselves useful to human beings certain plants have developed a great strategy for ensuring their own survival. Certainly bees fit nicely into this category as well. To bee sweet in this sense though is certainly not Love or indeed service, just a variation on survival of the fittest! Ha! I like the poem though.

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Nilima Deb 28 May 2016

the secret of life how to lead with all intelligence! wonderful poem, enjoyed nicely.looking for more such aromas.

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Ramesh Rai 29 June 2013

bees r very clever they give us honey bt do not give us technique to make honey

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Matthias Pantaleon 24 October 2012

There is no life of service life a bee's dedication to duty...

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Savita Tyagi 27 July 2012

Adorable bees! Lovely description of their selfless love.

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Simon Odhiambo 23 July 2012

Interesting and mind-involving. I like: Till laden with what is sweet only Yet takes no credit Save continues to hold and serve Something this exact, the real

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Poet Dragon 09 July 2012

Listen to the sound a honey bee makes eternally....Ommmmmmmmmm

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Jay Aguiniga 01 July 2012

Very good and discriptive. You are such an awesome writer. Thanks for sharing my fellow poet.

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Dickson Mseti 10 April 2011

sir, what can i say about this one, only MAY THE GOOD LORD BLESS AND KEEP FOR A LONG TIME FOR YOU TO GIVE US THE POWER OF WISDOM YOU HOLD INSIDE. BEES, I WISH I COULD BE LOKE YOU.

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Heavenly syrup! So love bees, Nature has strategy indeed! ; D

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