A Bee Comments

Life is all about give and take! Nature often destroys to create; the balance continues to be conserved!

The antithesis perfectly puts forth life's wonderful game... precisely phrased! ! !

A well crafted and poignant write, my dear friend but must capture the real message, life is a two ways street and fortunately I learned the hard and painful ways, like I said in my poem titled: IN THE PURSUIT OF HAPPINESS, that whenever there is an ending there is also a new beginning and what we think is a great loss, it turns out to be a blessing from the sky and it is time to move on! Love and Peace for always, my brother, my friend! Love and Peace for always! ...

i can't add much more than the comments of your other readers. nice concise juxtaposition of profit and loss

An amazing and clever view of two situations, a lost of the nectar for a flower, and the honey, a benefit for us, the humans. Great ideas in simple deep words..Cristina Teodor

When I was a young man, a million years ago, I used to work with honeybees, they are wonderful creatures, and provide a very necessary service and product. Unfortunately here in the states, there is a virus going on that is killing all our honeybees. Wonderful poem Akmal.

A beauty and a tragedy in the life of Bee, a creature's efforts, miles of travel in a day one fine morning all honey is with some one else. A beautiful write.

the bee gets its food and the flower get polengrains, a symbiosis

bees get food and flowers get pollination. a symbiosis. keen observation. marks 10

Excessive exploitation shall impair the nature. Use and conserve will give more benefits and every living thing may share the profit. Hope for the win-win situation.

This is quite clever.

A loss, that is a fascinating idea.....we certainly greatly appreciate that invaluable liquid gold...honey! Very interesting contemplation, short and sweet. I enjoyed it. The profit I definitely see, the loss I am uncertain of.