Thursday, March 22, 2007

A Bed Of Tissues Comments

Rating: 3.1

I lay here
the bed
tissues by
my side
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Scarlet .....
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Kristen Manski 15 May 2017

This one is really good also! I love all of your poems that I have read so far!

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Manny Diaz 09 September 2007

Hmm, i read some others of your poems, and they kinda seemed like you were forcing dark lyrics to come out. This poem i feel is the first i've read to have true meaning and feeling behind it. It is very good.

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Dipy Hermonite 21 June 2007

Wonderfully expressed. Wishing u a lot of joy in life, not pain.

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Edna Javelosa 15 June 2007

this relates to my poem 'Paper'..i've used lots paper rolls too pouring out tears until tears dry up..let's both give this world a beautiful smile, U.U...i loved your poetry..

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Ashlee Kilbourn 01 May 2007

i am the same as you i suffer from depression also i love your poems

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Barry Van Allen 24 April 2007

U.U., I don't know if you have noticed, but, you are a little less of each these days! B.V.A.

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Madly In Love 15 April 2007

Amazing write good job

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Rajaram Ramachandran 03 April 2007

Pain and pleasure go about in a cycle. No one suffers or no one enjoys too long. The girl U.U. will have her better days sooner or later. The whole world is praying for her.

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10/10 for me. That poem was so strong and sad. Hopefully you won't need those tissues anymore soon: -) Smiles N Hugs Rissa: -)

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Wandering Scarlet 28 March 2007

wow i think its pretty good, good job!

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Gabi Oso 22 March 2007

wow. i loved it.

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