I lay here
the bed
tissues by
my side
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Hmm, i read some others of your poems, and they kinda seemed like you were forcing dark lyrics to come out. This poem i feel is the first i've read to have true meaning and feeling behind it. It is very good.
Wonderfully expressed. Wishing u a lot of joy in life, not pain.
this relates to my poem 'Paper'..i've used lots paper rolls too pouring out tears until tears dry up..let's both give this world a beautiful smile, U.U...i loved your poetry..
i am the same as you i suffer from depression also i love your poems
U.U., I don't know if you have noticed, but, you are a little less of each these days! B.V.A.
Pain and pleasure go about in a cycle. No one suffers or no one enjoys too long. The girl U.U. will have her better days sooner or later. The whole world is praying for her.
10/10 for me. That poem was so strong and sad. Hopefully you won't need those tissues anymore soon: -) Smiles N Hugs Rissa: -)
This one is really good also! I love all of your poems that I have read so far!