A Bed Of Thorn Comments

Shows the ultimate frustration of the poet. Beautiful lines explaining the state of mind.

A beautiful poem that echoes loneliness of the heart. A great piece and rhyme.

a beautiful written piece. thanks for sharing

A brilliant piece of poetry! Fabulous use of simile! I vote this beautiful poem with a 10

Such a wonderful poem /

Baby my life is like a bed of thorn If I had a choice I would not be born. loved reading it

Baby my life is like a bed of thorn If I had a choice I would not be born. Loved reading it.

I like your poem nice one.63241

You have really expressed yourself but there is hope. Nice poem

very very nice poetry...............i like it

using few words, u described a lot about restlessness...brief & great poem...well done

It is a powerful write Andalif, but too melancholic in tone and spirit! ! Why don't you cast off your gloom and look for a New year of hope and cheer!

Beautiful expression of thoughts, sorrow musically expressed.

I have many poems written in these times of my life. They really are what make a man strong down the road. Cherish the creative energy that comes in times like these, and take out all of your pain in a constructive way.

really sir... we all miss that tender hand/ vanishing hand at some points of time, , , , , am i wrong? ? ? ?

Beautiful! I can well relate to this one :)

Wow again amazing and beautiful. Your good. I love it and enjoyed it.

i like asif nice poems thank you

I like this asif.... Beautiful write...

Well spoken a solid poem