Saturday, August 23, 2014

A Beauty Unseen Comments

Rating: 4.6

She is a distant dignified beauty
That constantly beckons to me.
Her ethereal words reach my ears,
Coming like the music of the spheres.
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Khairul Ahsan
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Khairul Ahsan 15 August 2015

@Ruma Chaudhuri, Thanks for your generous compliments showered on my poem.

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Susmita Kumari 16 January 2015

beautiful poem.....! ! !

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Khairul Ahsan 13 March 2020

Thank you, @Susmita Kumari, for the kind appreciation.

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Khairul Ahsan 14 October 2014

@Beach Girl, Thanks for reading this poem. I really wish that the one I wrote this poem about, would understand that it was she herself that I wrote about. It's not a fairy tale. The person is real.

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Beach Girl 13 October 2014

What a beautiful poem about a very mysterious woman! Very intriguing, as we are all wondering who she is.

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Ruma Chaudhuri 18 September 2014

Nice poem. Beautiful poem. But who is she? But through your wonderful pen you made her nice. Apon moner madhuri mishaye korechi tomare rachana. I think so.

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Nyia Schultz 05 September 2014

This poem speaks to my very soul. The words u use a very elegant making the poem all the more powerful

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Khairul Ahsan 13 March 2020

Thanks for reading the poem and leaving a kind appreciation of it here, @Nyia Schultz. Much inspired by the comment.

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Chinedu Dike 03 September 2014

Great title. I wonder who this beautiful lady is. A lovely piece.

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Khairul Ahsan 13 March 2020

Thanks for reading the poem and leaving an appreciative comment here. Much inspired, @Chinedu Dike.

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Khairul Ahsan 02 September 2014

@Sandra Feldman Thank you so much for the generous praise and the high marks of 10/10. Do you really think that 'A Beauty Unseen' speaks of 'someone from another time, another place, not real'? 'Some fantastic fairy tale Being, that does not belong in our Sphere'?

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Darlene Walsh 31 August 2014

This is a lovely poem, she sounds like a very special person and worthy of your admiration. The rhyming and flow of the poem was very nice and the description of her was beautiful.

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Khairul Ahsan 12 March 2020

'she sounds like a very special person and worthy of your admiration' - yes, indeed; she is very much so! Much inspired by your appreciation of the poem. Thank you, @Darlene Walsh!

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Sandra Feldman 29 August 2014

Sounds like Someone from another time, another place, not real. Some fantastic fairy tale Being, that does not belong in our Sphere. Perfectly and beautifully expressed., a joy to read and feel.10/10

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Mohammad Skati 29 August 2014

We all feel the same feeling.True feelings and emotions.

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Khairul Ahsan 12 March 2020

Dear @Mohammad Skati, Thank you very much for reading my poem and leaving your kind words here. Much inspired by the comment.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 28 August 2014

I'll not ask, who is she? she must be the past, alovedone, shemust be the childhood, she must be the loved one, The first stanza reads as =- -She is a distant dignified beauty That constantly beckons to me. Her ethereal words reach my ears, Coming like the music of the spheres. so she is not present and there isno questionof past .. atlast alovely write Breathe of happiness in the sea of sorrow..

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Khairul Ahsan 11 March 2020

Dear poet @Aftab Alam Khursheed, Many thanks and gratitude being sent posthumously for your kind comment on my poem. May Allah SWT rest your soul in peace!

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