She is a distant dignified beauty
That constantly beckons to me.
Her ethereal words reach my ears,
Coming like the music of the spheres.
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@Beach Girl, Thanks for reading this poem. I really wish that the one I wrote this poem about, would understand that it was she herself that I wrote about. It's not a fairy tale. The person is real.
What a beautiful poem about a very mysterious woman! Very intriguing, as we are all wondering who she is.
Nice poem. Beautiful poem. But who is she? But through your wonderful pen you made her nice. Apon moner madhuri mishaye korechi tomare rachana. I think so.
This poem speaks to my very soul. The words u use a very elegant making the poem all the more powerful
Thanks for reading the poem and leaving a kind appreciation of it here, @Nyia Schultz. Much inspired by the comment.
Great title. I wonder who this beautiful lady is. A lovely piece.
Thanks for reading the poem and leaving an appreciative comment here. Much inspired, @Chinedu Dike.
@Sandra Feldman Thank you so much for the generous praise and the high marks of 10/10. Do you really think that 'A Beauty Unseen' speaks of 'someone from another time, another place, not real'? 'Some fantastic fairy tale Being, that does not belong in our Sphere'?
This is a lovely poem, she sounds like a very special person and worthy of your admiration. The rhyming and flow of the poem was very nice and the description of her was beautiful.
'she sounds like a very special person and worthy of your admiration' - yes, indeed; she is very much so! Much inspired by your appreciation of the poem. Thank you, @Darlene Walsh!
Sounds like Someone from another time, another place, not real. Some fantastic fairy tale Being, that does not belong in our Sphere. Perfectly and beautifully expressed., a joy to read and feel.10/10
Dear @Mohammad Skati, Thank you very much for reading my poem and leaving your kind words here. Much inspired by the comment.
I'll not ask, who is she? she must be the past, alovedone, shemust be the childhood, she must be the loved one, The first stanza reads as =- -She is a distant dignified beauty That constantly beckons to me. Her ethereal words reach my ears, Coming like the music of the spheres. so she is not present and there isno questionof past .. atlast alovely write Breathe of happiness in the sea of sorrow..
Dear poet @Aftab Alam Khursheed, Many thanks and gratitude being sent posthumously for your kind comment on my poem. May Allah SWT rest your soul in peace!
@Ruma Chaudhuri, Thanks for your generous compliments showered on my poem.