A Beauty's Miscast Comments

three in one poetry lovely you play with mist and remain in doubts but I see a clever clout no doubt you wish he stays firm and stout and under your lovers warm arms without an iota of doubt tell him clearly to love you so dearly.. you sure are a Venetian poet a lover of lovers wish so many will endeavour to belong to you and in fact own you as in love Mars do Venus....Any one who has sense will love a young one like you if he does not take care perhaps he did not deserve you but hold on to him some day he will be grateful to belong to you how I was as young for you we all want to long to belong.

An appealing poem written in great style. Esp liked how u rhymed in danger with stranger. It should move the one whom its for. Kudos. U r most welcome to comment under my latest poem too titled, 'pay a visit to a riverbank, pls do

Love is a mighty spiritual experience that affects one profoundly - It's a voyage of pure bliss. However, it's also whimsical and temperamental, appearing unannounced and may leave without warning if it's not carefully nurtured at all times to maintain its bliss. Lovely poem, well articulated and insightfully penned from the heart with conviction. Thanks for sharing Julie.