A Beautiful Talent Comments

A true and satirical rhyme......... Why won't raise our hands for humanity, rather than turning to selfish pleasures......... A true and evocative write

Dear Vishal, Undoubtedly man has a unique talent but his over enthusiasm has created so many problem to our Mother Nature. Lovely Poem This one. I invite you to read my poems and send your views. you Can try this one: 210. Truth of Creation What will be the future Of the nation If the people keep their attention Towards only one direction If only a wheel is cared The other wheel is punctured And the chariot Of the country Will go in the dust ....................... .......................... I am Waiting for your response. Thanks!

its so nice to read such good poems from a poet like you, a well build piece with strong base well done dear

A potent write up with an implicit ironical strain running throughout the poem, to make the humans realize their might...and to make them think if they can do negative, then they can certainly use their positive approach in power to give the world a nice change...i like the parenthetical command...thx brother!

Nyc 1 to read it's a gud poem

let us build a new world, my dear poet, with all love all truth that are with us.