A Beautiful Sensation Comments

Wow, what a great write Hazel enjoyed Alan

Your characters are always very real in your poetry as they struggle with life and themselves. You give us the humanness of people and make us aware in such a way that leads to compassion, not judgment, never judgment. 10+++++++++++++++

''She wants no more Of destruction The man with the brown melancholic eyes Looks at her like she is a beautiful sensation, Life is now a constant elation. '' - Love, love indeed can heal everything! Holiday-makers fall in love all the time; sometimes it is just summer-love which adds to memories in old age; sometimes though, it is true love which could last a lifetime. As always, your poems come straight from the heart.

Looks at her like she is a beautiful sensation, Life is now a constant elation.......................................... May these feelings last for ever! Let this be a new beginning! Alcohol makes one a prisoner! So true, the earlier one realizes it, the better! The poem is beautifully rendered

'Love is crashing onto her beach Emotions are within reach' - A superb depiction at the right place of the poem. The concluding stanza is awesome, and the last line, 'life is now a constant elation', an icing on the cake!

Destructive nature is well woven into these words, highs and lows, very well written! ! ! !

It is a brilliant poem on nature, sensation and addiction having touching expression with nice penmanship. I quote.... She wants no more Of destruction The man with the brown melancholic eyes Looks at her like she is a beautiful sensation, Life is now a constant elation. Thanks for sharing.10

Great poem about a beautiful sensation.