A Beautiful Scenery Of Relation Comments
The car is mine; I drive it; It runs; Am I not related with the car speed sitting inside when it runs? yes, the velocity of the car has enveloped me; The body of the car is my body; I must take care of me-car body so that it would not collide with other things on the road.
The speed is me-contained
The speed is car-contained
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A great work is done. Excellent. Especially, the concluding lines are amazing. 10 from me.
car still moves when fuelled body moves with the earth unstoppable warmth arrows to dream above and yet unreckoned between the sun and earth....................wonderfully wrought by the imagery 10+, thanks for sharing
very philosophical write, Bob has really put it nicely. indded a beautiful scenery of relation. Mamta
I view my body as a vehicle, i am just inside looking out of eyes that see, steering far and wide visualize the control tower, here in my head i will lose my vehicle one day, then i will be dead
This is lovely! Thank you for taking your time to inform me on this beautiful poem, I'm so glad you did. Keep up the great work, Sarwar! ~Jessica
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On a trip by car in a softly nostalgic set and the car is running away...