A Beautiful Scar Comments

A passionate bit of verse, well conceived and elegantly brought forth from the heart. Thanks for sharing, Nathan.

i'm speechless.... so emotion filled: intense WOW wow.

this is an intense rush of emotion.. the best kind.

haha beautiful pause hmmm sounds sweet that is a good one 10s

this is so wow..i'm speechless again! its like a scar that you don't want to forget its meaning... thats like the real scars on me they all have a meaning and a reason to be on my body... and this is kind of a turn on! ! ! :) :) lolz this deserves more then 10+++ for thats how much i loved it! !

Hi, your poem flows passionative images of coming out of the cold into the warmth of love. It deserves nothing shy of a 10+++...very beautiful images of healing passion that smooth all scars Thanks for your comment on my poem 'a victim of love'.If you're new to Ph, welcome and keep writing you're good>>>>>>

Exploring new waters I see. Like I said, you're a storyteller. :) 10+