Monday, March 23, 2009

A Beautiful Nature Comments

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Nature paints her so perfectly in the eyes of a boy.
The rain upon her hair and the wind upon my back,
I invision her hand touching my cheek.
The rain washes away ill content and leaves passion
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Shawn Greyling
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Henry Brown 20 July 2009

This is a well thought out poem Shawn. As there is beauty in nature there is beauty in woman there is beauty in your poems Thank you for your message on my poem A beautiful bride. Do you mind posting a comment in that vain

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Barry A. Lanier 28 April 2009

Shawn has penned a beautiful allegory of the wonder of nature and how it mesmirizes all of our faculties....even as a beautiful lady, , , ,

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