Midst a weary night,
Under the moon light,
The weariness got me thoughtful,
Thinking about many lives.
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Fine and lofty verse elegantly brought forth in persuasive expressions with insight. Beautiful motivational piece set aside for sober reflection. A witty creation. Thanks for sharing Hemendra and do remain enriched.
Under the moonlight thinking about many lives is amazing. Taking care of beautiful mind is always very nice. This poem is wonderfully worded and beautifully created poem...10
There are three elental forces, mind, uniqueness and positivity. You have combined them in your poem. Bravo! To understand that the mind is all you have risen above all. I have many poems on this elemental forece that is all we are and ever will be.++++++++++++++10
Yes indeed because mind is the source of all the energies we have so we have to take care of it and thank you a lot for your comments it's really is a booster. Much love, stay blessed.
Write comment. Such a nice poem, H. S. D. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks