Wednesday, September 20, 2006

A Beautiful Mess! Comments

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As the sun rises
like a new babys' open eyes
The fresh rose smell ever
Eager to reach the top
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Nina Joseph
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~ Jon London ~ 05 May 2008

This is beautifully composed, full of emotion the visuals leep out from this fine write and capture the reader....Great poem 10/10 best wishes Jon

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