A Beautiful Mask Of Smile! Comments

It's like the mask of a beautiful smile... wonderful poetic expression! Liked it

Ma'am this is really beautiful poem in the mask livin' for others...this is really beautiful...so well penned...but the inner self desires to be self free ftom everything.

It's like a bird trapped in Cage sings a painful song For which the loud clapping heard but Inside the cage was a weeping bird. Very good examples to illustrate your points in the poem. tony

A mask of beautiful smile covers all the pains Poetically contemporary

A beautiful smile is the wonderful art God has done in the face of human being. We smile in both joy and sorrow. Day and night carry beautiful stars. All the stars smile at night and Sun smiles at day. When we smile in joyful mood we forget all pain. Revisiting this poem we feel very happy.

No day is same. Every day is a new day As bright as sun! Which is sure to come! ! ! ......touching expression with lofty theme. Beautiful poem amazingly delineated.

Will I be ever able to unveil the mask? Yes, a day will come when I will unveil my mask- - - -a very good composition

A very nice poem mam...it has revealed the facts of life......

mystically touches me the line- the mask of beautiful smiles, Covering the painful face. nice penned .... O yes look at me I'm smiling I'm smile I'm the treasure of smiling with the sorrow I've no link Pain is vain true in me living lane I the legend of happiest crane buy and sell just smiling for your genuine loving excellent writings

We may mask a smile but it unconsciously boosts our minds. Never fail to smile it has a positive effect on all especially oneself. Nice poem.++10 Robert

a mask of life, pains pleasures and emotions a jacket of toughness and softness to unveil the significance of life, in order wear all to conceal the the real life from others- well done - my 10+ too

As Shakespeare said, All the world's a stage, And all the men and women merely players; They have their exits and their entrances, And one man in his time plays many parts. Masks are an intrinsic part of life, like it or not. Thanks for sharing this poem.

Will I be ever able to unveil the mask? Yes, a day will come when I will unveil my mask I will laugh out loudly, cry out loudly And live a day only for me. .......the very same feeling, people want to express.Nice thought.Well written.

Beautiful mask of smile is beautifully unmasked in this gleaming write! The poetess has very candidly unfolded the real darkness behind the smile (the smile here is artificial) . A few lines I would like to quote here, ” Life, like a joker in circuses, who made people laugh/But hidden in laughter was his painful heart/Though all his days may not be pleasant ones/Yet he has to make the audience laugh. Simply I can say a fabulous creation! ! Thanks a lot for sharing.

wonderful and excellent one it is a real thing happen to me too its related to me

Beautiful write to unmask the pain within, heartfelt, ingenious write by imagery,10+. thanks for sharing

Everyday is a new day as bright as sun sure to come. Nice optimistic approach towards life. I enjoyed it. You are invited to read my poem I fall asleep. A unique 10+++ for the Poem

Everyday is a new day as bright as sun sure to come. Nice optimistic approach towards life. I enjoyed it. You are invited to read my poem I fall asleep.

great one but painful and true you may like to read my poems check out

A smile on face masks the hidden pain..well written poem