Monday, September 9, 2013

A Beautiful Life's Game Comments

Rating: 5.0

I was nowhere; neither was any trace of mine,
In fact, in the lap of death, enjoying life's pine,
I never fled but throughout the life, I bleed,
Still, enough blood is left, for peace to plead.
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Muhammad Ali 10 December 2013

superb. it is what i can say in words.

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Kalyan Mech 14 November 2013

“All those born will die”, death is not a surprise. To die unknown and untraceable is not wise. good write sir.

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Pardaz Sheikh 12 September 2013

“All those born will die true

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Geetha Jayakumar 10 September 2013

A beautiful poem with great message.. Yes, life is a game, whether we want to play or not, we are pushed to play it..loved reading it.

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David Wood 10 September 2013

A strong poem Aftab, we must not fear the future but live life in the present. What will be will be.

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Dave Walker 10 September 2013

A powerful life poem, a great write.

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Gajanan Mishra 09 September 2013

lovely gain, lovely poem, really beautiful, thanks, my dear friend.

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Neela Nath Das 09 September 2013

Yes life is a game.you want to play it or not, you have to.This is the very truth which we can't deny.

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Aftab Alam

Aftab Alam

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