perhaps tonight is the end of dreams
end the lies of your perception
perhaps tomorrow starts a new story
passionately cared...regardless of theory...
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Reminds me of what I am going though now! Took me on a beautiful journey once again! ! 8D
'who will rescue the lonely heart and cure the painful part? who will come to take the risk to comfort the fading hope? '... Nicely put, words that resonate strongly the pain of putting the pieces back together in one's life. Lovely style.
rescuing role/roll in future not available -even when pleading-My New Golden Rule
beautiful poem, sad tender and sweet combined, straight 10++ from me... i love it
The voice questions when she could have a love life again, the love she had is lost-she feels the loss badly and hopes for it to end, but for how long. Finally, her hope is becoming a reality-a beautiful journey it does make.
Oh such a sweet tender feeling in this poem, I can't even think of a sentence or stanza that I like the best, they are all tender and sweet. LOVED THIS a 10
soft breeze touches my skin kills every moment of sensation bury the love upon my dreams to a place of no return............................. wonder of love awes by grace heart resurrects by resilience... heart cries to latch on tunes yet sensation croon on the shadow of dream.....superbly yet it paints the art of love as when curved upon the skin of color, most ingenious flow of passion by imagery,10++++++, thanks for sharing
Like P. B. Shelley, You dream something new-new from all sides-sides from resurrection-the resurrection of Jesus Christ. You prove that you genius and I appreciate your poetic quality.
got me stun with your lovely sweet words.. keep on dear sweet poet.. hazem al..
i was carried away of your dream...wonderful each word, each line very creative..thanks best regads, jdh
i adore the last stanza ^_^ keep it up! hehe... hopefully you'll have a wonderful journey, butalways keep in mind that we make our own life's journey. ^_^
My Dear Lady Grace soft breeze touches my skin, kills every moment of sensation 'removing the love' For me it should be soft breeze touches my skin like your warm heart a true moment of sensation ;) Very Nice.
dreams end with night, and it is difficult to remain on dreams, life demands practical love, and face realities, , , , , , Grace it is wonderful poem 10+
great poem i like the words thanks a lot