Saturday, June 20, 2009

A Beautiful Journey Comments

Rating: 4.7

perhaps tonight is the end of dreams
end the lies of your perception
perhaps tomorrow starts a new story
passionately cared...regardless of theory...
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lady grace
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Akram Awadat 19 July 2010

great poem i like the words thanks a lot

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Warren Zukina III 31 December 2009

Reminds me of what I am going though now! Took me on a beautiful journey once again! ! 8D

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Melanie Johnson 03 December 2009

Great poem Lady Grace! ! I love your choice of words. =)

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fleur de lys 30 November 2009

'who will rescue the lonely heart and cure the painful part? who will come to take the risk to comfort the fading hope? '... Nicely put, words that resonate strongly the pain of putting the pieces back together in one's life. Lovely style.

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 11 October 2009

An interesting poem. I enjoyed it.

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Sherri Coulter 21 September 2009

rescuing role/roll in future not available -even when pleading-My New Golden Rule

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Seth Mutau 17 September 2009

beautiful poem, sad tender and sweet combined, straight 10++ from me... i love it

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Obinna Eruchie 07 September 2009

The voice questions when she could have a love life again, the love she had is lost-she feels the loss badly and hopes for it to end, but for how long. Finally, her hope is becoming a reality-a beautiful journey it does make.

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Myrtle Thomas 07 July 2009

Oh such a sweet tender feeling in this poem, I can't even think of a sentence or stanza that I like the best, they are all tender and sweet. LOVED THIS a 10

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Dr.subhendu Kar 05 July 2009

soft breeze touches my skin kills every moment of sensation bury the love upon my dreams to a place of no return............................. wonder of love awes by grace heart resurrects by resilience... heart cries to latch on tunes yet sensation croon on the shadow of dream.....superbly yet it paints the art of love as when curved upon the skin of color, most ingenious flow of passion by imagery,10++++++, thanks for sharing

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Sanjib Das 04 July 2009

Like P. B. Shelley, You dream something new-new from all sides-sides from resurrection-the resurrection of Jesus Christ. You prove that you genius and I appreciate your poetic quality.

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Hazem Al Jaber 02 July 2009

got me stun with your lovely sweet words.. keep on dear sweet poet.. hazem al..

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Catrina Heart 01 July 2009

Just so lovely LG..........

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i was carried away of your dream...wonderful each word, each line very creative..thanks best regads, jdh

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Juneil Sechico 27 June 2009

nice dream of a beauteous journey....well penned!

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Geovanni Leaño 26 June 2009

i adore the last stanza ^_^ keep it up! hehe... hopefully you'll have a wonderful journey, butalways keep in mind that we make our own life's journey. ^_^

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The Dreamer 26 June 2009

My Dear Lady Grace soft breeze touches my skin, kills every moment of sensation 'removing the love' For me it should be soft breeze touches my skin like your warm heart a true moment of sensation ;) Very Nice.

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Rafique Farooqi 25 June 2009

dreams end with night, and it is difficult to remain on dreams, life demands practical love, and face realities, , , , , , Grace it is wonderful poem 10+

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Angelica Ayman 25 June 2009

well written lady it's a great poem 10+++

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Merna Ibrahim 23 June 2009

very touching....well written.....10+++ Merna

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