Monday, October 21, 2013

A Beautiful Flower Comments

Rating: 4.5

You held a dried flower then laid it on the cold ground
With your head bowed lowly the tears began to fall down
He felt your pain and sadness then said to you with a smile
Lift up your eyes unto the hills then live life on my child
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Patricia Grantham
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Louis Rams 08 November 2014

these words come to you as they do to me, and it shows in your poetry I love this!

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Amitava Sur 08 July 2014

Such a beautiful flower's seed should be laid in everybody's garden. Totally it's a pleasure to read such a beautiful flower's poem. Thank you Patricia.

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Ken E Hall 27 May 2014

A beautiful flower a beautiful poem with a thoughtful poem from the poets heart..always a pleasure to read...always a pleasure to read your work...regards

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To grow upward is a good motivation. a beautiful poem.

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Yash Shinde 03 April 2014

...........thanks for sharing a poem, as beautiful as blooms of rose! ................

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Guy Dimitri Jagodinski 16 March 2014

Beautiful poem. Well written and an enjoyable read.

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Shania K. Younce 29 January 2014

I like the voice of this poem and the clarity of it. Bien.

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Adeline Foster 15 December 2013

Lovely thoughts in this poem. Read mine - His Purposes - Adeline

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Heather Wilkins 04 November 2013

beautiful Patricia. well written. poem

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Clarence Prince 31 October 2013

A lovely poem! Well done, Patricia!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 29 October 2013

The light will always shine on you each and every day. Nice message delivered providing a positive feeling. Thank you.

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Amitava Sur 27 October 2013

A well thought write up believing on the continuity. Life & time never stop.

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Valerie Dohren 23 October 2013

A lovely poem Patricia.

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Valsa George 22 October 2013

Yes we should have complete trust in God's providence! ! We are all beautiful flowers in God's garden, ever nurtured and lovingly tended to protect from withering away or fading out. A Lovely thought! A beautiful poem! !

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Patricia Grantham

Patricia Grantham

Moncks Corner, South Carolina
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