Sunday, July 27, 2008

A Beautiful Evening Comments

Rating: 3.8

A Beautiful evening in March in the early Fall
The magpies are fluting the corellas call
And the red wattlebirds on the blossoming trees
Their loud cacklings carrying in the freshening breeze.
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Francis Duggan
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Marvin Brato 24 September 2013

Beautiful imagination, thanks!

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Heather Wilkins 29 June 2013

beautiful writing. your last stanza lovely

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Martin O'Neill 02 March 2012

Red wattlebirds...what country are you writing from or about? Love the poem by the way.

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Rachel Butler 24 October 2011

'The sun going down red in the western sky And the roost bound starlings wheel and turn as they fly' RAB

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