Friday, May 1, 2015

A Beautiful Dream Comments

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It's hard to believe that everything was just a beautiful dream;
That everything would be done just like that, thinking we were too crazy with each other.
But here we are wide awake now we see what is real and not.
All I see that is real is that I love you and I don't know how to live my life in this crazy world without you, not real? Don't wanna say it.
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Aira Lopez
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Great write Carried away in your poem So nice

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Chinedu Dike 12 May 2015

Beautiful train of thoughts, well articulated and nicely encapsulated into a lovely poem penned from inner recesses of the heart. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Terry Craddock 04 May 2015

Dreams Siren Calls: Starlight Sparkling Waters dreams of our hearts are siren calls to wake is to risk being cast upon rocks tide pushes waves surge we can drown in a river of dreams washed away in starlight sparkling teardrop waters Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'A Beautiful Dream' by Aira Lopez. Dedicated to Aira Lopez.

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Terry Craddock 01 May 2015

Dreams of our hearts are siren calls, to wake is to risk being cast upon rocks, the tide pushes waves surge we can drown in a river of dreams.

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Aira Lopez

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