Wednesday, December 8, 2004

A Beautiful Day With My Love...... Comments

Rating: 3.9

When the sun rise in the morning
then you shine like a brighten lady
When the moon set in the evening
then you look like a beautiful lady
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Ravi Sathasivam
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Akhtar Jawad 04 June 2014

A beautiful description of love.

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Marieta Maglas 20 September 2013

Beautiful poem, thank you for sharing

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Patricia Grantham 28 March 2013

A truly enjoyed piece of poetry. Lose yourself in love. I appreciate this lovely and romantic write. Truly enjoyable.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 25 June 2010

‘When I close my eyes to sleep then you rest your head on my chest and listen to my heart beat says you are mine.’…such state is called beyond oneself and in/ within herself/himself…soused in emotive elements…you carried me farthest far…by your poetry…I envy your Lady Luck…being a lady for getting such a passionate beau…lolol …. thanks sharing Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Cristali Araguz 13 March 2010

that is so beautiful....

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Eyan Desir 09 December 2009

Yes indeed very nice.... Well crafted

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Mandara Pookal 05 December 2009

Your soft thoughts and whispering dreams are well contained in this beautifully expressive poem. Many thanks, mandara

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Munia Khan 05 October 2009

When the cool breeze touches.....YOU TAKE CARE OF YOUR LOVE! ! ! How magnificent a love poem can be! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I'm speechless.......So I'm writing.... Very very romantic n beautiful.....Well done.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 September 2009

then I thank God for giving you to me When I close my eyes to sleep then you rest your head on my chest and listen to my heart beat says you are mine...these are romantic andmemorable moments one enjoys inthe life.. i loved the weaving inwords....10 read mine indreverse way...divorce...no separate ways... homebound... come home

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Pink Butterfly ... 02 September 2009

Very romantic! ! ! I enjoyed reading it! Thanks for sharing, and for your comments as well. Keep it up! God bless you! -Pink Butterfly-

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Marieta Maglas 30 August 2009

wonderful lyric poem, lovely to read.......................10

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Ashraful Musaddeq 21 June 2009

'When I close my eyes to sleep then you rest your head on my chest and listen to my heart beat says you are mine.' Cute lovely love poem. As if a dream!

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Lady Grace 02 June 2009

contentment in life is in the arms of lovers..beautiful poem, expressing love..grace

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Surya . 02 June 2009

oh! wonderfull and happy family life.beautifully expressed.posted 10 surya

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Brittney N 23 December 2008

I agree with simple yet so meaningful.

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Shalini Kts 27 August 2008

a very simple and cute love poem, , ,

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simple yet meaningful... i like this poem. best regards, joan d.h.

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Cyclopseven R 23 June 2007

Azhagane oru kavithai. wonderful.

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Herbert Nehrlich1 08 December 2004

Very nice in its simplicity. H

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