Saturday, July 11, 2009

A Beautiful Day, A Beautiful Lady Comments

Rating: 2.3

All my days before yesterday
Were for me just a joke…
My heart is bouncing inside me now
Like nice music of the type of rock…
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Wael Karameh
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Ken E Hall 02 October 2009

The heart is bouncing for a beautiful lady on a beautiful day whats wrong with that Doc.....surrender....thanks for the read regards

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Meggie Gultiano 20 September 2009

A nice write! ! Lovely words..

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Obinna Eruchie 15 August 2009

Very heart drawn words, she may find them hard to resist.

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Paolo Libano 19 July 2009

She must have told you, 'I like you Doc! ' Cause otherwise, she's out of luck Heart beats are fading, she calls for rescue Infuse your lyrics, around the clock! :)

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sweet poem Doc..she will be forced to tell you as your words will attract her to you..well done.

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Catrina Heart 11 July 2009

wow.......who will hesitate to say and expressed her feelings to a perfect gentleman...well done! ! !

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