Wednesday, May 10, 2006

A Beautiful Day Comments

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I walked to the cliff top to watch the sunset
thinking of you and the time that we met
I watched as the sun drifted down from the sky
a reminding reflection of light in your eyes
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Charles M Moore
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A B Faniki 24 September 2019

Bautiful simply bautiful, thanks for sharing.

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Louie Aries 21 June 2018

Wow..so rhythmic like a sweet symphony..

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Ben Gieske 21 July 2009

The rhythm is very soft and relaxing. Wonderful the way you interwine so many images and involve so many senses. Very enjoyable to read and visualize.

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Fred Babbin 18 December 2007

A luv pome with lovely description.

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Ivor Hogg 30 March 2007

Enjoyed muchly in particular the closing Stanza ivor

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Esther Leclerc 23 May 2006

A truly lovely poem; especially like the last stanza with its pretty language. Thank you for sharing this sunlit day. Esther : ]

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Duncan Wyllie 20 May 2006

This would be so worth the read at any time of the day, so much contained, the imagery, the deep feeling for another and the flow and style all help to make this a 10! their fawning and waving high up in the air brought memories to me how you unfurl your hair Brilliant! ! ! Love duncan

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Myra Jefferson 18 May 2006

A beautiful day is a beautiful read and a beautiful feel, a needless to say, a beautiful poem. Respectfully, Myra J.

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Con Nie 11 May 2006

What a beautiful poem perfectly titled. Sincerely, Connie Webb

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Patricia Gale 11 May 2006

The word beautiful does not do this write justus. Well done Charles. A simply divine read. Patricia

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Scarlett Treat 11 May 2006

What a lovely write - the perfect ending to a perfect day. I could even feel the setting sun on my own face!

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Francesca Johnson 11 May 2006

Charles, I liked the line 'the sea.......when reaching the rocks leaping into a dance.' Your cliff top, with the sun setting on the horizon, sounds the perfect place for recalling those wonderful memories. Love, Fran xx

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Charles M Moore

Charles M Moore

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