I walked to the cliff top to watch the sunset
thinking of you and the time that we met
I watched as the sun drifted down from the sky
a reminding reflection of light in your eyes
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The rhythm is very soft and relaxing. Wonderful the way you interwine so many images and involve so many senses. Very enjoyable to read and visualize.
A truly lovely poem; especially like the last stanza with its pretty language. Thank you for sharing this sunlit day. Esther : ]
This would be so worth the read at any time of the day, so much contained, the imagery, the deep feeling for another and the flow and style all help to make this a 10! their fawning and waving high up in the air brought memories to me how you unfurl your hair Brilliant! ! ! Love duncan
A beautiful day is a beautiful read and a beautiful feel, a needless to say, a beautiful poem. Respectfully, Myra J.
The word beautiful does not do this write justus. Well done Charles. A simply divine read. Patricia
What a lovely write - the perfect ending to a perfect day. I could even feel the setting sun on my own face!
Charles, I liked the line 'the sea.......when reaching the rocks leaping into a dance.' Your cliff top, with the sun setting on the horizon, sounds the perfect place for recalling those wonderful memories. Love, Fran xx
Bautiful simply bautiful, thanks for sharing.