Saturday, February 25, 2017

A Beautiful Day Comments

Rating: 5.0

a beautiful day
does not take away the ache I feel

I do not speak
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Barry Middleton
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Nosheen Irfan 27 February 2017

Simply fantastic. How you convey the feeling in so few words is remarkable. We can walk miles alone when we are full of youthful energy but aging n illness are debilitating physically n emotionally. A huge 10.

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Barry Middleton 27 February 2017

Simple and basic emotion does not require many words and I am too lazy to write long narrative poetry anymore. Thanks for the praise.

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