Monday, February 1, 2016

A Beautiful Day Comments

Rating: 5.0

The trees are full of a chirpy joy
The air is fragrant with honeysuckle
The sky is calm, hearing intently
The medley music of the earth
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Nosheen Irfan
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Unnikrishnan E S 02 June 2016

The poem is so sweet and close to nature, that peace and quiet descent on the reader. Thank you Nosheen.

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It reads even better the second time. You know what they say If it's nice then do it twice Well done my friend. I have added this beautiful, positive inspirational poem to my poem list!

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Valsa George 03 February 2016

The last stanza is an icing on the cake..... A beautiful poem like the beautiful day!

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Bursting with a beauty this is both rich and refreshing. Well done my friend!

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Dimitrios Galanis 01 February 2016

picturable the scenessssssssssssssss

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M Asim Nehal 01 February 2016

Great imagery, nicely worded beautiful poem.....10+++++

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Lahore, Pakistan
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