Tuesday, December 31, 2013

A Beautiful Day Comments

Rating: 4.8

Today is the beautiful New Year day
With the clear blue sky above
A gentle breeze playing on every leaf
And every heart throbbing with love
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Valsa George
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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 April 2020

Today is the beautiful New Year day With the clear blue sky above A gentle breeze playing on every leaf And every heart throbbing with love........loved these beginning lines. This poem has a special attraction. It attracts a poet to visit time and again. Beautiful poem really.

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Kee Thampi 30 June 2019

When I walk through the grassy meads Wild blossoms kiss my feet As I inhale the salubrious air I feel the glee with which Nature, so richly replete really poetic

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 February 2019

Every beautiful motivates mind. There are many great glories our eyes capture through natural feelings. With great eagerness we grow towards light and we feel beauty of benevolent mind. New Year's beautiful day brings newness. This is truly a lovely poem....10

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kee thampi 04 December 2018

There are great glories for the eyes to see There is so much for the senses to perceive From little cares, when the mind, set free Sure, there’s reason to rejoice than to grieve! great writes

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 18 August 2018

This should be poem of the day to start a new day for every new year. A very apt title and the rest of the work presents an encompassing thought of positivity. Mixing this write with nature enhanced the beauty of this profound piece of work. Excellent write.Very well crafted.10++++

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Indira Renganathan 06 July 2018

A beautiful poem that gives us immense hope for a bright New Year...also a beautiful note of a meaningful advice....very happy to read this poem....thanks a lot Valsa for your comment on my poem Tinnitus... I am glad you got recovered from that ailment completely...wish you all the best in all coming years....stay blessed and happy always

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 November 2016

Travellers! Here on earth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bri Edwards 25 April 2015

My favorite lines: There is no vexation in the air The pain of yesterday cast to the bin The anxiety of tomorrow held at bay The prospects of today overpowering the din.............if only each day good be as grand...at least at the start! some more favorite parts: playing on every leaf smile shuttles from lips to eyes i notice a departure from the 'rhyme scheme', and i would rather see such a departure than have a rhyme scheme dictate too much to the author. thanks, Valsa, for the nice wish, but here in too-dry California, we could use fewer clear and sunny days and more snowy and rainy days! AND fewer people watering lawns and washing cars AND just plain fewer people! bri :)

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Akhtar Jawad 29 September 2014

A beautiful welcome with nice hopes.

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New year is a great event and a very good poem about new year is felt wonderful and nice.

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Musfiq Us Shaleheen 07 January 2014

very serene feel.... With the clear blue sky above A gentle breeze playing on every leaf And every heart throbbing with love very nicely written.... wish you a very happy new year...

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Unwritten Soul 05 January 2014

I wish you the greatest too...wonderful poem to soothe heart, make life easier in this new life in new year :) Happy New Year..._Soul

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Padmanabhan Ananth 04 January 2014

Brilliant positive poem. I heartily reciprocate your wishes. I too have written on this topic titled New Year's Cheer. You may like to read.

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Anil Kumar Panda 04 January 2014

Such a sweet and a poem to remember.Salute to your talent.

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Khairul Ahsan 04 January 2014

A mind cheering, soothing poem, full of positivity. 'There are great glories for the eyes to see There is so much for the senses to perceive From little cares, when the mind, set free Sure, there’s reason to rejoice than to grieve! ' Truly motivational, inspiring! Thanks for this nice gift on the new year's day. The note is awesome! It carried me away to a mystic world for some time. May 2014 be a year of happiness, peace and prosperity for you and your loved ones.

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Tulip Julio Tulipan 03 January 2014

oh it's really beautiful date! I love it. May year of 2014 is as beautiful as your poem! Thank you for your nice gift!

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Mike Barrett 03 January 2014

Hi Valsa, thanks for this poem....it's heartwarming, especially to those of us in the grip of winter's coldest days. -20C here today, but bright an sunny. That's today's silver lining! Best wishes to you and yours over 2014!

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Gideon Arthur 03 January 2014

The year passed may contain dark memories. We must cast them aside and be optimistic that this year will be a year of blessings, peace and love. Nice poem.

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Kavya . 02 January 2014

a very positive poem Mam, really lifts our spirits high! Yes there are problems in everybodys life and it has to be overcome with the hopes that good days are waiting for us ahead and that this too will pass... Very nice lines Before me is the promise of a new dawn The day sure has a grimy side, I know But let gloomy truths not spoil this lovely New Years day

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Shahzia Batool 02 January 2014

positivity is as contagious as negativity is, Valsa ji, it's a paradoxical reality...yes, life is a journey, we are travellers, passing time is a milestone...your poem is freshening and strengthening for some very good reasons... a fine start of the year...apologies for reading late, but it's never too late for a fine read...wishing the same to you too :)

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