# A Beautiful Dawn Comments

No My Friend, you are so right...it is not just about the dawn....so Beautiful. Your Prose is Magic. Thanks also for your kind comments to my own. May your mind stay clear forever to display your True Gifts. Kind Regards. Philip

Like the expression, 'the young dawn's magic'. Very inspiring.

'It's not just about dawn.' Waking up is a celebration of life. Thank you for this.

sandhya pravartatey....uthishto uthishta govinda uthishta garudhwaja......i was reminded of these lines when I read the poem! !

Alas wwe may have to wake them one by one but it matters not for still the dawn awaits us all--- 10

The last line clearly speaks it out....the dawn from the nescience of the inner self..really a matured poem...nice reading

nice poem, especially the line, that you wont shake and wake him, i really hate when someone wakes me up from my sleep...

The awakening should be from within Self realisation result of seeking The rise of Gyana its rays To enlighten the soul Which lies asleep! Reminds one of songs of Tagore, The lulling waves of a smooth flowing river, The lotus blossoms and the swaying reeds The song of birds rejoicing in the sky All fall as an unpainted scene As you gently sing to awake my soul! A Suprapatham - A song to gently awake us all! Angel

Dawn is indeed a heavenly time.......far away from the mad crowd and the stress and pressures of life! Thanks for posting

wake up, wake up...to your true awakening....yes, it's not just about the dawn....

It’s beautiful, really a beautiful poem like a beautiful dawn. Yes! It’s not just about the dawn. Wonderful Samanyan! Wonderful! ! The last clinching line turns the poem up side down and then brings it to an unending state of meaningfulness...10/10. Regards Naseer

Absolutely great! But unfortunately most of the people miss!

this is a very inspiring write..and you used beautiful imagery here..the dawn..a positive outlook in life..a hope.. beautiful Sam..

I wake up everyday, fresh and free from the troubles of the previous day to a new beginning, a new day. Waking up to the lovely sound of those sweet birds is so refreshing and energising. Nice write...............

as mourning tore each grave the heart wounded with pain. scented with hope and wonder call the dawning hope of paradise.....such a lovely poem, worthy to be published in all resting place...... a great poem that life is not just a dawn to wait...but a moment of rejoicing with all created form....... thank you for sharing....God bless...10 ++++++

a wonderful anaphora: ''wake up and see for yourself...friend'', a metaphorical expression at the same time, because it is like ''a beautiful dawn''. excellent poem, lovely to read................10+++++

Good write.......beautiful to read

Very deep message in this... yes we need to wake up on our own n see / realize how beautiful the things are around us..especially after a long dark night... dawn is smiling n waiting :) ...

inspiring lines to wake up to the beauty of life regards sandhya

Oh, I always love to wake up with a beautiful morning. This is so lovely and refreshing, my friend. :)